Does this align with the work you did in Business Being Bootcamp around your brand? My PERSONAL opinion is it’s totally 80s =) which is awesome, but I don’t get how “Legacy Coach” and this align. Can you share more about your brand vision and anything you’ve already worked out around messaging for your ideal client?
If your friend is sending these to her brides – what is her brand vibe? – if they are drawn to her style you might consider setting up this flyer font/etc. to complement her branding / colors, etc.
Also – trust yourself =) what feedback are you looking for? Love you.